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Lit211 The literary form

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This lesson introduces students to the disciplinary concept of Literariness, defined in CECA as the investigation of how literary texts create aesthetic experience through form, structure, and style. Students will learn that analysis is not limited to paraphrasing meaning but involves recognising how writers craft intensity, beauty, and emotional resonance.
The lesson draws on principles taken from Formalism, Stylistics, Narratology, and Reader-Response theory — echoing theorists such as Peter Barry, Todorov (narrative structure), and Hawthorn (archetypal character functions). This positions analysis as a study of how aesthetic effects are constructed.

By the end of the lesson, students will be able to:

  • Explain what makes a text feel “literary” by referring to its aesthetic effects.
  • Identify key language techniques that create emotional or dramatic impact.
  • Begin analysing an extract using disciplinary vocabulary rather than simple paraphrasing.

To understand how writers create dramatic or emotional effects, students need to know that literature is built from deliberate choices in language, structure, and style. These choices work together to shape how a reader feels — for example, creating tension, beauty, shock, or sadness. Students should learn that literary analysis is not just “what the quote means” but how the writing produces an experience for the audience.

  • Aesthetic experience — the emotional or intellectual effect a text creates for a reader.
  • Figurative language — non‑literal language such as metaphor, simile, personification.
  • Ambiguity — deliberate uncertainty; when language can be interpreted in more than one way.
  • Prosody — sound patterns such as rhythm, rhyme, alliteration, assonance.
  • Paradox — two ideas that appear contradictory but reveal a deeper meaning together.
  • Pathos — language designed to evoke pity or emotional sympathy.
  • Parallelism — repeated structures that create emphasis or resonance.
  • “The writer crafts a powerful aesthetic experience by using…”
  • “This technique creates dramatic appeal because it allows the reader to…”
  • “The interplay between sound and meaning here suggests that…”
  • “The emotional intensity of the moment is heightened through…”
  • “By constructing this paradox, the author encourages us to consider…”

🚫 Incorrect method:

“This quote shows Lennie is strong. It means he works hard. I’m enjoying this text, I think it is very good.”

What’s wrong with it:
This is paraphrasing — it simply restates the content of the text. It does not explore how the text creates emotional effect, nor does it draw on techniques or aesthetic qualities. Whilst the reader needs to show engagement, stating that the text is enjoyable does not evidence the engagement you re having.

✅ Correct direction:
Students should discuss how literary devices shape emotional response, e.g., the rhythmic repetition, imagery, or emotional contradiction that generates a deeper experience for the reader.

Imagine a film scene where the camera moves slowly, the lighting softens, and music swells. The meaning of the moment is not just what characters say — it’s the experience created by cinematic techniques. The experience can have a thrilling, emotional, thought provoking impact on readers. Similarly, literature uses language techniques to create emotional or dramatic effects, not just to communicate plot.

Of Mice and Men by John Steinbeck (1937) is a novella exploring the dreams, loneliness, and fragile hope of migrant workers during the Great Depression. Steinbeck’s writing is admired for its emotional intensity, use of symbolism, and careful shaping of moments that deeply move readers.

“Well, I can go away,” said Lennie. “I’ll go right off in the hills an’ find a cave if you don’ want me.”

George shook himself again. “No,” he said. “I want you to stay with me here.”

Lennie said craftily, “Tell me like you done before.”

“Tell you what?”

“ ’Bout the other guys an’ about us.”

George said, “Guys like us got no fambly. They make a little stake an’ then they blow it in. They ain’t got nobody in the worl’ that gives a hoot in hell about ’em —”

“But not us,” Lennie cried happily. “Tell about us now.”

George was quiet for a moment. “But not us,” he said.

“Because — ”

“Because I got you an’ –”

“An’ I got you. We got each other, that’s what, that gives a hoot in hell about us,” Lennie

cried in triumph.

Why this extract suits the learning objective

  • Contains parallelism (“I got you…” repeated) creating emotional resonance.
  • Uses pathos and emotional vulnerability to shape reader response.
  • Reveals aesthetic effect through rhythm, simplicity, and repetition.
  • Demonstrates dramatic appeal through contrasting tone and tenderness.

“This scene shows that George and Lennie are friends. It means they look after each other. We see them. They tell each other that they can rely on one another, so they seem close, like family. They are different to other people who don’t have anyone that gives a hoot in hell about them. What George and Lennie has is unique.”

Why if fails:

It paraphrases content rather than analysing the aesthetic experience. There is no engagement with the language, sound, structure, or emotional impact.

The emotional power of this moment arises from Steinbeck’s careful use of parallelism, especially in the repeated line “I got you to look after me…”. This rhythmic echo creates an aesthetic experience of intimacy, emphasising the fragile comfort the men find in each other. Through this repetition, Steinbeck generates pathos, inviting the reader to feel the warmth and desperation beneath the words. The simplicity of the language, combined with the child‑like prosody of Lennie’s speech, deepens the dramatic appeal by contrasting innocence with the harsh world they inhabit.

Why it succeeds:

  • Uses technical language associated with the choices made by the author
  • Prosody, aesthetic (emotional) experience, pathos, repetition are all terms that relate to where literary texts get their power
  • It understands that texts are designed to impact us; to make us feel, think or behave differently because of the text.

Which of these statements is correct and why?

  • Stories are constructed with language and sounds to give people a particular emotional response
  • Stories are written and people enjoy reading them

Bullet point 2 is the better response because it recognises the need to find what emotion is achieved through the shaping of language and sounds

Students now apply the concept of Literariness / Dramatic Appeal to a new extract from the same text (or a different moment from the studied text), using the vocabulary and sentence stems from this lesson.

Instructions to students:

  1. Read the extract carefully.
  2. Identify one or two language techniques that contribute to the aesthetic experience.
  3. Select at least two key vocabulary terms from the glossary.
  4. Begin your analysis using one of the sentence stems provided.
  5. Focus on how the writing creates an emotional or dramatic effect, not simply what it means.

Success Criteria (shared with students)

A successful response will:

  • Refer explicitly to aesthetic experience or dramatic appeal
  • Use disciplinary vocabulary accurately
  • Explain how language choices shape reader response
  • Avoid paraphrasing or retelling the content

Students may begin with:

“The writer creates a powerful aesthetic experience by using…”
“This moment is dramatically effective because…”

    Finish the sentence:

    “writers needed to shape the language of their texts carefully because __________.”

    Indicative content:

    • The most effective way of transmitting an important message
    • Audiences will connect with the text better when the language is well crafted
    • Prosody (sound effects) are a highly impactful way of attracting our attention
    • Authors want to impact readers to think and feel in new ways

    a) Pre-reading of the next lesson – read through the knowledge so you can be ready to discuss in class.

    b) Apply the learning of today’s lesson to your own private reading text. Write a paragraph explaining how today’s learning changes how you might conceive your text. Be sure to use the key vocabulary and sentence stems.

    c) Write a paragraph about the discipline of Literature, explain how key words from today’s lesson impact the field overall.

    d) Add today’s vocabulary and sentence stems to your own glossary. Highlight any that you are unsure about, but you must also research the meanings yourself and develop your glossary to include this differentiated support.

    How did you do? Remember, this is the disciplinary knowledge for Literature – it needs combining with the text you are studying now. Can you use this knowledge to write differently about the text you are studying? When you are ready, access the next lesson in this series.